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Post by magafox9 on Jul 26, 2015 0:23:06 GMT
Name: Magafox (Maga the fox) Age: 17 Nationality:Nord/Swadian
Hair: Brown Eyes:Light Blue Facial Markings:None
Skin Color: White
Height: 5/11 Weight: 165 Build: Muscular Body Markings: None
Interests: Archery, Ponys, Sword fighting, Reading Dislikes: Confrontation, Bubba, Laban, Strengths: Level headed, Intelligent Weaknesses: Not incredibly strong, Willing to do anything for people who help him. Skills: Good archer and swordsmen, Understands the basis of cavalry. Fears: Large bodys of water Profession: Archer/cav Backround/History: He and his brother Aldrik had a Swadian mother who died when they were born. When he was young he was pushed by his father Sigvat into archery and reading. Maga always got what he want whether Sigvat knew about it or not. His lies to friends and family is how he earned the title of fox. At 14 he left for a year to go to Swadia with a trader where he learned the basic's of the languages spoken in the area.(Khergit and Swadian) He later decided to extend the trip and go with a band of land traders back to his home. They spend time in Vaegir territory where he learned some of the language before he went back into nordic territory and met up with his family at 16. When he finally met with his family he was welcomed by his brother with a warbow that he had made for the occasion. Equipment: Light to medium armour with a warbow and sword.
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Post by commissariat on Jul 27, 2015 15:39:54 GMT
Megan Fox, I'd recommend removing fox from your name and giving yourself a first name. Your name is alright, but you can simply tell people your nickname. Similar to how my character does not have her title in her name.
I request you give some more depth and meat to your lore, this is lacking to put it bluntly. We would like to see some of your RP-potential here by writing a compelling piece of lore. You have a brother who also has an bio that I replied to. I am sure you two can both work together to make a pretty awesome bio.
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